Some of you

Some of me

Some of we

can be free

Love you feel

Can be real

Keep it togehter and it will last forever.

OR

Some of you

Some of me

Some of us

Can be lost

Free can be real, Love can be seen

We dont need pain or/and cold cause we, hold on

Live and be grand and we keep stand.

which "poem" is best? Just came up with them...

I'm not the best one on doing poems or what to call it.

but I try and it's so fun. Because when you really do something you are happy with, it feels so good!